Activity log for Robert Frouin

Rplace 'Recommendation' with 'would be useful..'
I do not have anything against this recommendation, but it could be made less explicit. For example, instead of starting with `It is also recommended...`,...
Submitted by Frouin Robert on 7/11/00

Suggestions for re-organizing the manuscript
Here are some suggestions for re-organizing the manuscript.

1) The contents of section 2.1 (Background on East Asian Dust) could be included in the introduction,...

Submitted by Frouin Robert on 5/29/00

Needs reorganization
I think the reviews are generally positive, even B's. B's points are more about re-organization than anything else.
Submitted by Frouin Robert on 5/24/00


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