Response
to Reviewer B
November 4, 2000
We appreciate Reviewer B’s
acceptance of the paper and the suggested revisions. Our responses to the
specific comments are summarized below.
1. Recommend a synoptic map for each dust event
A
synoptic weather map of the Gobi Desert area (pressure, wind field was added to
Figure 1.
2. In Figure 1, better resolution needed for
the insert b.
3. Figure 2 is confusing. Separate the April 15
and April 19 images.
Yes,
Figure 2 was very busy and confusing. We have separated the April 15 and April
19 images and used only two days (rather then 3) for each event. The images
were also re-labeled.
4. Page 13, Sentence stating "This is
supportive of the notion……This analysis should be corrected or deleted.”
The
sentence was deleted.
5. Page 14, "The inset in Figure 2d should
read 2e.
Typo
corrected.
6. Page 18 and Figure 4b. Why is the elevated
backscatter labeled ‘dust’ while the area 3-6 km as boundary layer aerosol?
Figure
4b was re-labeled. Also, the area above 5 km was called as ‘suspected dust
layer’.
7. Page 19 and Figure 6a. Poor picture, no boundaries, distinguishing dust and cloud
Figure
cleaned. Dust and cloud patches were labeled.
8. Figure 6c. Objection to combining daily
averages with different number stations. Use the 25-station data set.
Figure
6c now uses the 25 station dataset only. The Y label was moved from the center
to the Y axis.
9.
Figure 8: Missing labels in inserts a, b, and c.
Insets
a, b, c have been re-labeled.